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Magnitka Edits

Discussion in 'Lore Submissions' started by Tennessee116, Apr 1, 2021.

  1. Tennessee116

    Tennessee116 Petty Officer First Class

    Rather than completely rewrite Magnitka's lore, I am submitting these medium-sized edits. Some notable changes include:
    • The dates have been pushed forward to more accurately correspond with the fact that civil war survivors are still alive and hold positions of power. They would now be in their 60s and 70s instead of 80s and 90s.
    • The cities have been renamed. Labortown is now Hephaestia, and Minendorf is now New Magnitogorsk.
    • The State Security Service has been renamed to the Colonial Security Bureau.
    • The mercenaries who killed the rebel leaders have been specified to have belonged to SAARE.
    • The article has generally been edited to improve its quality when compared to other colony pages.
    • Etymology section added.